Saturday, October 4, 2008

I broke down the couple pages that i had and this is what ive come up with. Theres
still a couple parts that are being tweaked. i was going to print it as a book, but after posting it i kinda like the way it looks with each page under the other. I dunno, its still being worked on










4 comments:

grace lee said...

ooo it looks a lot better with the pages all broken up like that into separate spreads. and i love how you revised the page with the red type, it looks great without all the extra type on the left page.

Anonymous said...

this came together man, good job!

............................ said...

better.

don't bind just yet.

have a feeling this will get better yet.

so, hang in and keep revising when the moment hits.

love.

g.

............................ said...

you need some text type blocks somewhere.

proof that you can do them and well.

g.