better.starting to move around the page and look like a game.that's fine for this.your aesthetic all adds up.typography inside the arrows still a bit uncomfortable.how can you make what seems like a simple kids game more sophisticated without changing the aesthetic?how can you up the ante?g.
this is so cute! i really love the illustrations and it looks a lot cleaner and easier to read than the previous version
this needs to read like an infographic--that is, the percentages need to make sense with the illustration.perhaps the numbers should be in scale with percentages?or another way.up to you.g.
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better.
starting to move around the page and look like a game.
that's fine for this.
your aesthetic all adds up.
typography inside the arrows still a bit uncomfortable.
how can you make what seems like a simple kids game more sophisticated without changing the aesthetic?
how can you up the ante?
g.
this is so cute! i really love the illustrations and it looks a lot cleaner and easier to read than the previous version
this needs to read like an infographic--
that is, the percentages need to make sense with the illustration.
perhaps the numbers should be in scale with percentages?
or another way.
up to you.
g.
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